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When once a mortal walked the day,
A heavenly angel passed his way,
He took one look at her and began to cry,
She came down to tell him it would be alright.

Then she kissed him and flew away,
He sat there, waiting for her everyday,
But never would she come,
He'd stay there wondering how he'd been so dumb.

Then one day she returned again,
But his heart could never mend,
She cried and pleaded, what had she done?
He told her that she'd been the one,
But she had just left him out to dry.

She could never undestand the things that he had said,
As she stood over him and he lay dead,
She picked him up and opened his head,
And took a look inside.

She saw the hopes and dreams he had,
All the good ones and the bad,
The memories that would never be,
She saw everything that he had seen.

She saw the pain that she had wrought,
The reason why his heart had stopped,
Looked upon his fallen form,
And kissed his pale lips.

He awoke and thus he smiled to her,
He told her he was wrong,
That he should not have shielded his feelings,
He sang to her his final song.

And with his anger overthrown,
He kissed her and turned to stone,
His flesh to bone,
She watched as he finally died.
©2005-2009 !DarkSqueee
:icondarksqueee:

Author's Comments

Well...an overdue work, I suppose. I don't really like it, though. I think it's total crap. ^_^

Just got to thinking...and wrote. Well, tell me what you think.

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:iconlord-of-the-whelps:
whoa ..... i continue to be awed ... that's not crap, it's DEEP. DEEEEEEEP.


amazing, as usual. *grumbles half-heartedly*


well done, sweetie.

--
98% of teenagers does or has tried smoking pot. If you're happy not to be in the 2% that hasn't, raise your bong in...

STONER PRIDE
:iconqwithoutau:
Wow...This might be one of my favorites from you although it sounds familiar... I love it. +Fav

--
Freshman year =QwithoutaU



...Was too long ago...
:icondarksqueee:
Thank you for your benevolent words. I know not what else to say, but I'm sure the words will come to me eventually. Until next we speak, my Australian beauty.

IT WAS ME! I WAS THE TURKEY ALL ALONG!!! *cough cough* Ahem...wow.

--
|[_]|2
|[*]| Greatness to the second power.

1...2...3. My pistol owns you all. ^_^

\\¯\/¯/ |¯|)¯) /¯/\¯\ \¯\/¯//: PWNZ YOU
//_/\_\ |_|)_) \_\/_/ /_/\_\\
:iconsa-chan:
funny, sounds familar... u-u; you're not gonna die on my, are you? (and is it to vain to think this has something to do with me?)

--
I gave you these roses
But I left in the thorns
I'd rather hurt someone than hurt myself
I'll dispose of you like a lighter out of fuel
I'll lose you on a dusty shelf


~Sense Fail: Choke On This

_ Sen _
:iconsa-chan:
by the way, it's beautiful. i like it, kyle.

--
I gave you these roses
But I left in the thorns
I'd rather hurt someone than hurt myself
I'll dispose of you like a lighter out of fuel
I'll lose you on a dusty shelf


~Sense Fail: Choke On This

_ Sen _
:icondarksqueee:
Um..may I ask how it sounds familiar? (And no, it is not vain of you to think it. But don't worry, it is not necessarily about you OR anyone. I just kinda reflected on my life.)

And I may just drop dead...don't plan on it, though.

--
|[_]|2
|[*]| Greatness to the second power.

1...2...3. My pistol owns you all. ^_^

\\¯\/¯/ |¯|)¯) /¯/\¯\ \¯\/¯//: PWNZ YOU
//_/\_\ |_|)_) \_\/_/ /_/\_\\
:icondarksqueee:
THank you, Sen. Much appreciated.

--
|[_]|2
|[*]| Greatness to the second power.

1...2...3. My pistol owns you all. ^_^

\\¯\/¯/ |¯|)¯) /¯/\¯\ \¯\/¯//: PWNZ YOU
//_/\_\ |_|)_) \_\/_/ /_/\_\\
:iconsa-chan:
just sounds familar to me. only to me. (okaydokie)
DON"T YOU DARE! i'd die of grief. ;-;

--
I gave you these roses
But I left in the thorns
I'd rather hurt someone than hurt myself
I'll dispose of you like a lighter out of fuel
I'll lose you on a dusty shelf


~Sense Fail: Choke On This

_ Sen _
:iconsa-chan:
yoooooooou;re welcome. lol. ^^ thanks for the comments on my deadjournal.

--
I gave you these roses
But I left in the thorns
I'd rather hurt someone than hurt myself
I'll dispose of you like a lighter out of fuel
I'll lose you on a dusty shelf


~Sense Fail: Choke On This

_ Sen _

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